As I was hiking through the woods, I was kept company by the sounds of the leaves crunching under my boots. The cool mountain air wrapped around me, making me glad I'd remembered to wear a sweater. Brightly colored leaves danced in the sunlight as the breeze moved through the branches of the trees. My mind was filled with the sounds, smells, and textures of nature. It was a beautiful fall day, and I was glad to be outside where I could enjoy it.
Now it is your turn to write a descriptive paragraph about the picture. Your paragraph can be imaginative and written as a story, or informational. Whichever genre you choose, make sure you check for complete sentences, correct capitalization, punctuation, spelling, subject-verb agreement, and dscriptive language.
Remember to include your initials or first name. Your reply is due Friday, November 11.
15 comments:
When I was trotting through a forest,I was comfortable with all the birds singing beautiful tunes.The swaying of the trees were also one of the reasons why I was so comfortable.The other animals besides the birds like squirrels and other animals that live in the forest made me comfortable too. JUSTIN
When I was taking a hike with my mom, dad, my brother, and my dog I was walking on the trail while I was around birds, trees, and twigs. Suddenly I realizezd that there was a dead tree on the ground! It was amazing. My mom and aad took a picture of it. My brother and I felt comfortable with it next to us. After we walked a little more we walkled through a place where the Civil War was going on. Well, thats what my parents said. I love to hike! Ana
When I was taking a bike ride through the forest I was comfortable with all animals.The birds cherping the bunnies hopping and squirls running.But I was most comfortable with deer because thy can't do any harm.ARH
I was chasing a squirrel into the woods and he climed up into a tree.The squirrel was gathering nuts and as I looked up a nut fell on my head! "Ouch"I said as the nut landed on my head. Then i ran inside cring for my mom. my mom said "What happened?"I said "I got hit by a squirrl with a nut."My mom quckly ran to the freezer and got me an ice-pack.she asked if I was ok?I said "Now I am."I said."Good honey would you like to lie down?"mom said."I love you mom."I said "Honey"said mom "yes" I replied "Your not going too chases a squirrel into the forest again right?"she said I said "No maam."I said. Then iever went back into the forest even though I wanted too.THE END.Leah
As I was walking throw the woods I saw a stream.I thought about the world and sat down.I watched the stream went down the wet path.I saw the beautiful leaves fall from the trees.Just then I head something.It was a baby rabbit!SJN
When I was dashing through the forest I was comfortable with everything .The birds chirping, the squirrels trotting, and the bunnies hopping .Especially deer the that almost make know sound.ARH
When I was walking home from school I saw the wind swirling and the leaves twirling. It felt like a fall tornado. The wind carried me up. It was quiet then the wind roared at me. The colors were bright and it was weird.Kirk
Fall
As I was hiking through the woods on a wonderful fall day I thought I would never go home. Then I realized I left my jacket at home. Then it got cold by the mountain wind so I was freezing I want to go home, but I kept on walking. Then it got dark and heard coyotes howling at the moon so I got really scared. Then I saw some frogs hopping across the river. Then they croaked at me. Now it was pitch black and I thought I was lost. Then I saw a house, and it was my house. I got home safely, and I was so happy to lay in my bed. HCC
Fall
As I was hiking through the woods on a wonderful fall day I thought I would never go home. Then I realized I left my jacket at home. Then it got cold by the mountain wind so I was freezing I want to go home, but I kept on walking. Then it got dark and heard coyotes howling at the moon so I got really scared. Then I saw some frogs hopping across the river. Then they croaked at me. Now it was pitch black and I thought I was lost. Then I saw a house, and it was my house. I got home safely, and I was so happy to lay in my bed. HCC
I was hiking through the forest, when I felt a slight breeze and wanted my jacket. I could see the beautiful light blue cool river. Then I saw a cool rock and skipped it in the water. Next some fish jumped out of the water, so I threw some bread. I stopped and looked at the beautiful different colored trees. I wondered what it would be like to see this every day, and just to be in the wonderful nature. owen
One day I was taking a little jog as I saw the most beautiful lake I've ever seen!As I took a nap I sat under a pretty red tree,so much of a gorgous red it made me stair and fall asleep faster.It was more red than a fresh and ripe apple.EIK!
It was a beautiful fall morning as we stepped out of the car. We were in the village of Blue Ridge. We visited a bunch of shops (all of which were very boring), then boarded a train that would take us through the Blue Ridge Mountains. At one o’clock, the train left the village and into the mountains. The scenery was beautiful; full of the colorful leaves. When we came back, we went to the apple orchard. It was a lot of fun.
Rajath
I was walking though the woods and I sall a stream. But i hurd a noise it was the trees. But the wind was not blowing. I looked it was a baby deer. T ogether we watch the sunset go down. It was a butifull fall picture. I took it with my camera. After the sunset went down, it was cold. I am glade I brought a jacket. Maggie
By Graham
Fall is so fun. I always go to the fun pleases I can I only do that because each day is different I mean by each day is different some days are cold some days are hot and some days are gust right. The pleases I go are creaks usually I love the all the trees and the sound of the water brushing across the rocks I love fall!
When our class did fall pictures, some of my classmates wore red, blue, and bright yellow. I wore a bright yellow shirt, white pants, and a necklace called a choker. If you are wondering why I wore bright colors is because it felt like summer. The picture turned out great but looked nothing like fall.BS
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